Matt, Overall, a few of these poses are strong and you're definitely seeing the fluid gestures here - but you need to use more paper and stop cropping the figure. Try to have a better sense of how much space the entire figure will take up on your page. If I only see one drawing per page, it will be fine. The top page has really good drawings that just need more room and a lighter touch to define contours. If your eye abandons the subject so you can refine some forms and details, so be it.
Matt,
ReplyDeleteOverall, a few of these poses are strong and you're definitely seeing the fluid gestures here - but you need to use more paper and stop cropping the figure. Try to have a better sense of how much space the entire figure will take up on your page.
If I only see one drawing per page, it will be fine. The top page has really good drawings that just need more room and a lighter touch to define contours. If your eye abandons the subject so you can refine some forms and details, so be it.